Proof read essay please?
I dont know why the paragraphs wont indent, so I put a dash by each paragraph. The topic is about: The advantages of living in Florida.
Please tell me if I get off topic too.
-Florida is a great place to live in. Residents
Right now, it's reading like a very, very boring book.
"I like Florida. It's great. These are the reasons why it's great. "
It's boring.
Spice it up!
First paragraph - start off with





My name is Bill Howard, I live in Tampa Florida. As a Malibu Kayaks Pro Staff member, I spend a good amount of time on the water fishing. I recently bought a pair of your sun glasses at Bass Pro Shops in Orlando. I haven't had them for that long,