Proof read essay please?

Apr 14, 2010 by marco t | Posted in Other - Education

I dont know why the paragraphs wont indent, so I put a dash by each paragraph. The topic is about: The advantages of living in Florida.

Please tell me if I get off topic too.

-Florida is a great place to live in. Residents


Right now, it's reading like a very, very boring book.

"I like Florida. It's great. These are the reasons why it's great. "

It's boring.

Spice it up!

First paragraph - start off with

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